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Magnificent beauty
Eyes blue as the sea
You mean so much to me
You're all I'll never be
Skin unblemished and fair
Hard, empty, cold
For which, most don't care
For your hand to hold
I ponder how you feel
You're silent, and lonely
Will your glass wounds heal?
Or will they rot only?
Chocolate brown hair
A bit tattered and curled
Covering the lost expression you wear
Hiding it from the world
Your dusty leaf green dress
Tumbling down over your glass shoes
Most would call you a mess
But they have so much more to lose
You stay so still
Propped up against the wall
You have no will
My poor porcelain doll
©2008-2009 ~Galaxy-of-Hearts
:icongalaxy-of-hearts:

Author's Comments

I love this one, it took me around 20 minutes though! Typing then backspacing and erasing about a million times before I finally got it down. I still have to read it over for mistakes! @_@; Hope you like and enjoy it! Please comment!

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:iconkuragarikurasu:
O0O!!! OMG This is probably my favorite from you ever. I love it. MAN I REALLY LOVE IT!! DDX> I have to draw something for it now XD

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MUSIC=LIFE

This essence of love and beauty induces the executioner and the crowd declare him to be innocent, before falling into an orgy.

Fuck yea.
:iconamoru:
*has fallen in love wit your poem* SQUEEEEEE! I heart. The only grammer mistake I found was you put two "the"s in one line.

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my naruto fanfic. check it out or i shall eat your brains. MWAHAHAHAHA *cough cough*
:icongalaxy-of-hearts:
Rofl, thank yous! xD

I can't wait to see it!

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:icongalaxy-of-hearts:
Oh shit. *Fixes.*

YAY!

Lmfao arigatou! xDD

:hug:

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:iconamoru:
your welcomes. I luvs it.

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あもる

[link]

my naruto fanfic. check it out or i shall eat your brains. MWAHAHAHAHA *cough cough*
:icondreamcatchme:
Wow, this is just amazing.
One of the best one you have posted here =o

Keep up the beautiful writing hun (:

xxx

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mjessshpauumssness!
:icongalaxy-of-hearts:
Heheh, glad you think so! ^ ^;

I'll try!
Thanks! >w<

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:iconmandyc:
awesome :D

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I love Patrick Hall more than we will ever know...
True love starts with a kiss.
DAMN IT!!!!! I lost a penny
:iconohjoyplz: HA HA Can't get enough of this smiley XD
:icongalaxy-of-hearts:
Thank you! ^_^

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